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Saturday, 26 July 2008

Torchwood XC E1 P3

The Blowfish looked up, "Ianto, im a fish, water heals me!" and some of the water flew into him, and he pulled out his gun, and shot Iantos foot, and Ianto gasped and fell down, "Gwen, Ive been shot, and i think i am about to drown, bye..." and he pulled out his, gun, crawled up, and The blowfish got his, and they shot, the blowfish had been hit in the heart and ianto in the body, knocking him backwards, and he fell, the fish didnt have enough time to heal, and his heart stopped.

Gwen shouted into the phone "IANTO!" and Jack came round the corner, "Ive scanned for him on the SUV, and his readings just went down, with another, the blowfish" Jack got the sack of dead weevils and threw it in the SUV, and then let Gwen in, "Go now and we can cover up the dead fish person before anyone finds it."

The SUV stopped next to the fish, and Jack used a match on it, and it burnt up. "That is almost the last of its kind, Ive found out most of them are Cyborgs, like the one when i met you again, and BannakaFallata, who the doctor told me about, they usually hold stuff, and when the fire burns out we will find out whats inside" then it stopped, and a blye flash appeared, and Gwen and jack were sent flying, and they saw a holographic form of Cpt John.

"Hi, its me again, you need to get them all now, before its too late, you need to mend the 13th cryst ... before its too late because... its in 7 parts there is some in ... and also you have one, but theres also one in ... good luck, and you need to do this before ... oops dodgy signal is fading. Cya,"

Gwen and Jack looked at each other and Grabbed the Projector and then Jack saw a small green and gold Shard, that could fit in a corner, "Ok, now we need 6 more of these crystals, before something unknown happens and we have a unknown time limit. Great."

Tuesday, 22 July 2008

CWE3

Scene 1: Ship
Jako: Your Attacks are all blocked!

Kamorik: 5

Jako: What...

Kamorik: 3

Jako: Wha..

Kamorik: 1!

A Bomb exploded under Jako, the sheilds disabled, the guns snapped and Jako fell unconsious.

Kamorik: Shove him into the Geonosis Power supply, then make it minimum power, then destroy the controls.

Thire: Yes General.

Scene 2: Illum

Later on that week, Thire had been given some new troops, and got Commando Training under Commando Apel, and they had been given a task to eliminate the forces in Ilum, which were trying to destroy it so the jedi lost the lightsaber crystals.

Thire: Apel, There is minor Force Activity in the caves, when it has been force feilded, i think that a Dark Jedi has got threw,

The Temple suddenly began to collapse, the bleeping on the scanner stopped and then a mushroom cloud of fire and smoke left the temple, and fireballs headed in all direction, and one was heading at the Ship for Thire, Apel and there squad,

Apel: Jump Thire!

Thire and Apel Jump as the fireball burns up the ship, trapping them.

Thire: We have lost our Coms Units, and our transport, and there is still another unprotected temple,

Apel: We need to get there but its on the other side of the planet,

Thire: Ill flag the area, and then we can get the flag by the other troops, who set up the force feild.

Apel: Fire!

Thire ignites the Flag and grabs it, and Apel grabs it aswell, they vanish,

Scene 4: Ilum pad
Thire and Apel Run out of a small sheilded off pad, and look up, they see the temple, and then see a door, and walk in, they then see a band off hooded figures, who turn, and send lightning into Apel, who then activates a sheild and the sheild reflects it into the figures, and one of them screams and begins to burn up.

Apel: Dark Jedi,

The fire like from the other temple starts, and then Apel gets hit, and falls down, Thire screams and shoots the Dark Jedi, who then falls down, and stops the spell, he then shoots the others and chucks a bomb,

Thire: Bye!

The bomb explodes, and the room caves in, and kills them all, but Apel grabs thire and escapes, but then a rock fell onto him,

Thire: Apel,

Thire shoots the rock, and pulls out Apel, who then begins to burn, a hole in his amour got caught by fire with the Dark Jedis Force Fire trick, and burns up, and begins to melt the ice that they are sat on, it begins to crack into peices, and then he gets seperated from Apel, and then he places down a flag, and sets it on fire,

Scene 5: Base

Thire appears in the base, on the teleport pad, and begins to laugh, and a blue glow comes from his eyes, then fades off, he pulls out his gun and shoots at the controls, and all the clones point guns at him

Thire: I blocked your weapon system!



Monday, 9 June 2008

Clone Wars ep2

Scene 1: Codys Ship

Thire's Troops are Mending their guns, but Apalnas Survivors are healing

Cody: What happened with Tyrannus?

Apalna: We were about to assasinate him, but a rockfall fell on him, and he saw us, the force saved him

Thire: So our squad blasted the rock fall, and tried to Execute Dooku

Apalna: What Caused the Rock Fall?

Cody: We Were shooting at a Droid, I went in to find out what happened,

Medic (A): Commander. Your Troops need to take 3 years off to recover

Apalna: Clones never have days off, Your a Medic, you had the rules programed into you, how can you do that,

Cody: Wait!

Cody Pulls out his pistol and blasts the Helmet Medic, a small stick is coming out with a pod at the end

Cody: Droid!

MedicDroid: Roger!

(A) Clone: Impossible

Apalna Trooper A whips out a battle knife and chops off the neck, it exploads, and a spark ignites the wiring,

Apalna: Thire, Group up, weve lost men, and escape! Cody, Bye!

Apalnas Blue and Green Soldiers and Thires Red Soldiers Jump off, Cody presses a SOS button

Scene 2: Ground

Codys ship crashes into a Cliff. The Troopers climbed up, and saw they had Droidikas Surrounding Them,

Apalna: Cody was a Fake, it was a trap, he tried three times to kill us, He tried to trap us in a cave, use the fake fake Medics explosion to kill us and made us fall into a Droidika pit, or hit that rock

Apalna Hits his Wrist, a small Detonation pack comes out, he drops it on the floor,

Apalna: Destroyers? or Destroyed!

Apalna hits his wrist, and a lightning like pulse zaps through the Droidikas, Apalna Grabs the Explosive Slab and puts it back,

Apalna: Thire, Commandos need this stuff, but shock troopers dont

Thire: Were Designed for worse, Were near the equator so the next Base is a mile away, look,

Points at Horizon, they pull on there jetpacks and zoom to the base

Scene 3: Base

Jedi general Kamorik is stood at a control panel, he is HammerHead, like Roron Corrob, Thire and Apalna Walk up to Him

Kamorik: Commanders, There has been Detected that there a some Cloned Clones who are evil in the army

Apalna: Yes, a Cloned Commander Cody tried to kill us, we only have a soldier left each, and Thire has his medic

Kamorik: You will get new troops soon, we have detected that You are a Clone, Apalna, Since the Real Apalna vanished in the kamino factory, and we lost all life signs. You killed him, you are a clone!

Kamorik uses the force to shatter the Helmet

Apalna: I aint a Clone at all, Im Jako Fett,

Jako laughs and punches Thire, and two pistols come out of his wrist

Jako: I can fire four guns in two places at once now,

Jako points all of his guns at Kamorik, who ignites his saber, but laser sheilds appear in seperate ares of Jakos Body

Jako: Your attacks are all blocked!

Sunday, 8 June 2008

Clone Wars ep1

This is a fan fic that Pete Smith wrote for the site, him and a few of his freinds and people who want to help him are doing it. It is about the Clone Wars, in the first year, this episode is about Commander Thire's troops escaping Geonosis, and the 501st Commander Apalna Trying to retreive A Holocron with information on the death star on it.

Scene 1: Commander Thires Ship

Thire: Squad, Prepare for a rough landing.

An Explosion hits the ship, "

Clone Pilot: Commander! Weve lost the engeines, we'll hit the ground at terminal velocity!

Thire: all power to front Turbo sheilds, deactivate everthing to put all power to front Turbo!

A blue glow surrounds the ship,

Thire: Troopers, Saftey Posistions!

Scene 2: Above The Ship

The ship zooms into view, and speeds down, they hit the ground

Scene 3: outside the ship

Commander Thire and his troopers climb out, The Pilot comes out last

Thire: We need to Get to apalnas Squad,

Scene 4: Geonosis Factory

Some 501st Soldiers are shooting down Geonosions, The Commander has a badly injured arm, and a Clone Medic is stood next to him, he shoots at a geonosian but the geonosian blast destroys his pistol

Apalna: We need to get to the hangar, Dooku is escaping!

A Geonosian lands next to him, he punches it, and grabs the gun, and fires at some geonosians, they all die on the spot.

Apalna: Get the guns, kill as many as possible, and get to the hangar!

Apalna Runs to a door, and shoots the control panels, the door slams open, "

Apalna: Quickly!

The 3 survivors and Apalna get to the door, and climb threw, Apalna shoots the panle on the other side, and the door slams shut, They look round, and see count dooku.

Clone #1: Destroy the ship!

Dooku: No!

Dooku ignites his saber, but the ceiling collapses on his ship, trapping the five there

Clone Medic: Were Trapped!

Scene 5: Other side of the rock fall

Thires Troopers Arrive,

Thire: Detonate the Rocks,

Scene 6: the first side

Dooku is fighting the Four Clones, Clone #2 is dead, so theres online Clone #1, Medic and Apalna Left

Thire: (oov) Fire!

Dooku: Wha-at!

Dooku Turns round and is blasted back by the blast, Thires Squad walk out, and Apalna Grabs Dookus Lightsaber, Thire puts his pistol on Dookus Neck,

Thire: We need that holocron, Weve had information that it destroys planets, give it to us or we will kill you,

suddenly droids burst threw on the other side, and blast Thire, Thires Medic comes up to him, while the un injured Clones fight the droids, Dooku laughs and runs off, but drops the holocron, Apalna Blasts the Holocron, but a droid blasts his face, paralyzing him.

Thire: Troops, Retreat!

Thires 7 surviving squad members (4 clones, 1 pilot, one medic and Thire) and Apalnas 3 survivors (Medic, Apalna and 1 clone) Run, and Yoda bursts through the door, spinning in the air and avoiding Geonosion and Droid Blasters chops down half of the army in 17 seconds, giving the team a chance to run, 2 of thires members got blasted, as they got out

Scene 7: Outside

Commander Codys Squad Run up

Cody: Did you get the holocron?

Apalna: No, We Destroyed it,

Thire: We need Transport!

Cody: I Have enough room for the 6 of you in my gunship, General Yoda has Order for your troops to retreat to coruscant, Order 32

Torchwood XC E1 P2

Big Guy Slashed at a main control panel, and a similar weevil and two more behind smashed more panels, then suddenly a bullet hit big guy, and he collapsed, Two more bullets flew into another of the three remaining weevils, who was knocked out, then the big guy look a like raised his hand at the other weevils. Gwen walked out of the shadows, "Gwa-en?" The weevil stuttered, "Sorry, Owen." Said Gwen, and shoved a knife in Owens Arm, and hand cuffed him, feetcuffed him, and cuffed the cuffs together, and the same with Big Guy, Jack was wrestling the others.

Ianto Surfaced and gasped, he had been unconsious for half an hour, and saw bubbles in the water, The blowfish was still about to die, and looked at Ianto, before Ianto shot him. Ianto Pulled up the fishes body. They Climbed onto Land, they were miles away from cardiff, he got a buzz on his phone, "Hello, Gwen, Youve found owen? Killed Big Guy! Im stuck in the middle of nowhere with a dead fish and no car, and im soaking, get the SUV down here now!"

Saturday, 7 June 2008

Torchwood Series UC1 Episode One: Recovering Status part one

TORCHWOOD
Beyond the Government and Higher than the police, the 21st century is where it all changes, and torchwood, is ready,

A week after Tosh and Owens Death, Torchwood was busy covering up the Radiation leaks and Weevils. "Tosh Check up on..." Shouted Jack, but remembered Gray shooting Tosh. "Ianto, Check up on the Tabloids see what poo there saying, tell them that evidence says it was just a publicity stunt, and same bout the radiation!" Jack Shouted, and looked at Toshes Scanner, there was a Blip on The scanner, around the Radiation plant, "Gwen! Prepare the SUV for radiation, since theres a couple of roque weevils, and Big guys there!" He Shouted. Big Guy had been a pest for torchwood for years, He was a weevil who was infected by radiation, and had closely Survived being ripped up by water hags, by the radiation fixing him. "It looks like hes getting a power boost. or summat to do with owen..."

Later the Trio Arrived at the plant, And a red sports car pulled up, and they saw a blowfish in it "Ah.. Ianto, your job!" Jack said, and pointed at the fish. "ok Capt!" Ianto Said, and Hopped into the boot as the fish drove off, Ianto climbed out and grabbed his gun, "Oi, Nemo!" He shouted, and shot the fish, and the fish turned round, and gasped, with his last power, he drove into the lake,..

My Torchwood Series

I am starting a torchwood series about the post exit wounds torchwood. Episode one part one coming soon, well in five mins