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Even though it says we are on 42 posts, and i say its 49, it is because there is actually 49. Some of them are hidden bonuses. if you submit you get one of them. and a prize.
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Authors
In 5 months, we have only had 3 authors, and 2 who i invited, so we are still hireing, you get a free 'Ive submitted' badge for your website, and added to my BFFB Awards, (Closing Date 1st of Jan), so for more information on how to submit, and win the BFFB Awards and get the prize and get the submitted badge (and a animated one if its for the awards) please look under the archives at the side. Thank you.
PS; Even if you think everyone else will do it so it wont matter if you do, what if they dont?!
WW3 UPDATED WEEKLY... almost.
Authors
In 5 months, we have only had 3 authors, and 2 who i invited, so we are still hireing, you get a free 'Ive submitted' badge for your website, and added to my BFFB Awards, (Closing Date 1st of Jan), so for more information on how to submit, and win the BFFB Awards and get the prize and get the submitted badge (and a animated one if its for the awards) please look under the archives at the side. Thank you.
PS; Even if you think everyone else will do it so it wont matter if you do, what if they dont?!
Sunday, 31 August 2008
100th visits!
Hi, we now have 100 visitors. Please tell people this to get us more. Then you get a reward. Ps, The Story compitition is coming soon, so start planning a story to enter. Must be around upto 3 pages. Must be under Pg-13 to be shown online.
Friday, 29 August 2008
Tales of Terror!
Hi, Whovian man from Whocrazy, our partner site, aka we share cboxes, has been making these films, and we have agreed to have them published here aswell as his youtube channel. This is episode one. This is his discription on the Youtube channel:
The first episode in a series of short horror stories. I apologise for the bad quality of some shots, eg. background noises, people in the way. Also, this is Linda's first acting job, so, please be nice.
Even though this isn't great, don't give up on the series yet, it's going to get much much better.
Enjoy:
The first episode in a series of short horror stories. I apologise for the bad quality of some shots, eg. background noises, people in the way. Also, this is Linda's first acting job, so, please be nice.
Even though this isn't great, don't give up on the series yet, it's going to get much much better.
Enjoy:
THE MAN IN THE MIRROR
Thursday, 28 August 2008
Dalekkid19092's Clone Wars Spin off: Order 66
Scene 1: Ship
Thire is with some new troops, with his memories put back into his head, he is with a jedi master, Claro Tewar, who is pulling on a space helmet, since he cannot survive in starfighter conditions, he is a gungan.
Claro: Hey, Mesa ready for battle thiresa.
Thire: Ok, im setting my troops to prepare, You can Head off
Claro jumps into his ship, a white and red modified ep 3. He flies out the hangar,
Scene 2: Space
The modified is flying threw space, shooting at the seperatist base and he sends a torpedo at the bridge, it hits,
Claro: Bullseye!
he shoots into the hangar sheildtransmitter, then topedoes into the hangar, blowing it, up, then his engines burst up, fire from behind, he looks, freindly, fire, then it hits again, his engines stop, and he begins to plummet down, and finaly lands on a moon. He climbs out, and ignites his lightsaber, clone and droid forces are racing to the moon, he screams, and a torpedo hits him, blowing the moon up.
Scene 3: Another planet, middle off a battle feild
A selkath jedi master is chopping down droids with his double edged green lighsaber, then a clone blast hits him, he turns round, the commander fires at him, knocking the lighsaber back, and it slices his arm off, then he closes his eyes. A bith jedi master watches in horror and runs to his starfighter, He flies off.
Scene 4: Kashyyk
Jedi master luminara is with commander gree and a wookie, then a Clone scout runs up to him, and nods, they pull out guns, and fire at the wookie, the wookie falls down dead, and luminara strikes at the scout, who falls down with his head chopped in half, and Commander gree shoots again and Luminara drops here lightsaber, and falls off the dome she is in. Gree walks through to another dome, and nods at a scout, they approach yoda, who jumps up and spins, theyre heads fall down, then the bodies. Yoda runs off.
Subtitle: 5 years later
A small group of wookies are huddled round a fire, and in the background show everything burnt down, Then, A Early version of a imperial shuttle lands, A group of clones climb out and fire at the wookies, The wookies shoot back and one roars, and grabs the Storms, and jumps, and kicks the leader in the face, he is dragged off by a commander clone, and is thrown into the shuttle, The storm clones shoot down the remaining wookies, the ship begins to fly, but then spins round into a tree, exploding, A wookie jumps out, followed by some imperials, and they fight, until the wookie is stunned, and is dragged in.
Scene 6: Ma'ar Shaddam
A Jedi Starfighter lands next to a workshop, an armoury, with Mandalorian type armour, A Bith Jedi gets out the starfighter, the same one as before, but scarred, and his ship burnt. He walks up to them, and points at a Armour similar to a clones, but modified,
Bith: (Huttese) Che copah? (English) Price?
Merchant: (Huttese) Goba Jujumon So Ahh (English) 157 Credits.
Bith: (Huttese) An Dyst? (Human) And Ship?
Merchant: (Huttese) Bo Donocha So Ahh! (human) 224 Credits.
Bith: (huttese) Poodoo! (En) -censored-
Bith reaches for his lightsaber, and switches it on
Bith: (HTS) La pim nallya so bata de wompa, Mikiyuna! Pasta mo rulya! Do bata gee mwaa tusawa! (EN) I will get back to you on that one, hands off your weapons and back up against the bar!
Merchant: (Hts) Kava doompa Jeedi stoopa! (en) Youre a Jedi Fool!
The bith uses the force to throw his starfighter at the workshop, and it sets it alight, The Merchants are backed against the wall, and the fire sets them alight, he lifts his hand infront of the merchants face, and the merchant, falls back, and rushes inside, coming out with some armour, and points at a starfighter, Davaab Type, mandalorian, The bith nods,
Merchant: (HTS) Yuna Puna! (EN) First Class!
The bith nods again and begins to shake hands with the Merchant, and then ignites his lightsaber again, and puts it in the merchants neck, the merchant falls, the bith nods again, and opens the box, The helmet was similar to a early Swamp troopers helmet, and the armour was mandalorian, and it had a Modified Kashyyyk Stalker, and a Dc-19 twin blaster, He pulled on the helmet, then climbed into the mandalorian armour, He shot at the ground, it made a explosion good enough to collapse a small building. He put the helmet on his dash board on his ship, and flew up. Suddenly a laser hit the ship. He spun, 2 early versions of the Modified ties for the Emporers guards, he checked his hyperdrive, it had been hit, he hit the dashboard, and loop-de-looped, and the homing missiles missed, and he flew in a loop round the ties, but he was hit by the missiles, and it hit the cockpit, he was knocked out, and flew away, fought dead by the ties.
Thire is with some new troops, with his memories put back into his head, he is with a jedi master, Claro Tewar, who is pulling on a space helmet, since he cannot survive in starfighter conditions, he is a gungan.
Claro: Hey, Mesa ready for battle thiresa.
Thire: Ok, im setting my troops to prepare, You can Head off
Claro jumps into his ship, a white and red modified ep 3. He flies out the hangar,
Scene 2: Space
The modified is flying threw space, shooting at the seperatist base and he sends a torpedo at the bridge, it hits,
Claro: Bullseye!
he shoots into the hangar sheildtransmitter, then topedoes into the hangar, blowing it, up, then his engines burst up, fire from behind, he looks, freindly, fire, then it hits again, his engines stop, and he begins to plummet down, and finaly lands on a moon. He climbs out, and ignites his lightsaber, clone and droid forces are racing to the moon, he screams, and a torpedo hits him, blowing the moon up.
Scene 3: Another planet, middle off a battle feild
A selkath jedi master is chopping down droids with his double edged green lighsaber, then a clone blast hits him, he turns round, the commander fires at him, knocking the lighsaber back, and it slices his arm off, then he closes his eyes. A bith jedi master watches in horror and runs to his starfighter, He flies off.
Scene 4: Kashyyk
Jedi master luminara is with commander gree and a wookie, then a Clone scout runs up to him, and nods, they pull out guns, and fire at the wookie, the wookie falls down dead, and luminara strikes at the scout, who falls down with his head chopped in half, and Commander gree shoots again and Luminara drops here lightsaber, and falls off the dome she is in. Gree walks through to another dome, and nods at a scout, they approach yoda, who jumps up and spins, theyre heads fall down, then the bodies. Yoda runs off.
Subtitle: 5 years later
A small group of wookies are huddled round a fire, and in the background show everything burnt down, Then, A Early version of a imperial shuttle lands, A group of clones climb out and fire at the wookies, The wookies shoot back and one roars, and grabs the Storms, and jumps, and kicks the leader in the face, he is dragged off by a commander clone, and is thrown into the shuttle, The storm clones shoot down the remaining wookies, the ship begins to fly, but then spins round into a tree, exploding, A wookie jumps out, followed by some imperials, and they fight, until the wookie is stunned, and is dragged in.
Scene 6: Ma'ar Shaddam
A Jedi Starfighter lands next to a workshop, an armoury, with Mandalorian type armour, A Bith Jedi gets out the starfighter, the same one as before, but scarred, and his ship burnt. He walks up to them, and points at a Armour similar to a clones, but modified,
Bith: (Huttese) Che copah? (English) Price?
Merchant: (Huttese) Goba Jujumon So Ahh (English) 157 Credits.
Bith: (Huttese) An Dyst? (Human) And Ship?
Merchant: (Huttese) Bo Donocha So Ahh! (human) 224 Credits.
Bith: (huttese) Poodoo! (En) -censored-
Bith reaches for his lightsaber, and switches it on
Bith: (HTS) La pim nallya so bata de wompa, Mikiyuna! Pasta mo rulya! Do bata gee mwaa tusawa! (EN) I will get back to you on that one, hands off your weapons and back up against the bar!
Merchant: (Hts) Kava doompa Jeedi stoopa! (en) Youre a Jedi Fool!
The bith uses the force to throw his starfighter at the workshop, and it sets it alight, The Merchants are backed against the wall, and the fire sets them alight, he lifts his hand infront of the merchants face, and the merchant, falls back, and rushes inside, coming out with some armour, and points at a starfighter, Davaab Type, mandalorian, The bith nods,
Merchant: (HTS) Yuna Puna! (EN) First Class!
The bith nods again and begins to shake hands with the Merchant, and then ignites his lightsaber again, and puts it in the merchants neck, the merchant falls, the bith nods again, and opens the box, The helmet was similar to a early Swamp troopers helmet, and the armour was mandalorian, and it had a Modified Kashyyyk Stalker, and a Dc-19 twin blaster, He pulled on the helmet, then climbed into the mandalorian armour, He shot at the ground, it made a explosion good enough to collapse a small building. He put the helmet on his dash board on his ship, and flew up. Suddenly a laser hit the ship. He spun, 2 early versions of the Modified ties for the Emporers guards, he checked his hyperdrive, it had been hit, he hit the dashboard, and loop-de-looped, and the homing missiles missed, and he flew in a loop round the ties, but he was hit by the missiles, and it hit the cockpit, he was knocked out, and flew away, fought dead by the ties.
Monday, 25 August 2008
Torchwood XC E4 P3
At the top Mickey appeared and grabbed Ianto, "Cya Gwen." Mickey said, and pulled ianto of the edge with him, "NO!" Gwen shouted, Then they reappeared next to gwen, with ianto having mickey in a headlock. Jac and owen burst threw the door, "Am I late?" Jack Said, and punched ianto, "Sorry ianto" Jack said, and wiped his eye, and pulled open iantos mouth, and shoved in 2 small pill like objects, "Retcon, will remove all traces of bilis from him. But its a overdose, the only amount strong enough to stop him, and itll make him out of action for months to recover." Jack said, and they watched the black gas leave Ianto, Ianto slumped, and slipped off the edge, falling, Jack hit his manipulator, and landed in time to catch ianto, but squashed himself. He revived screaming a second later.
In the Hub, The Team had decided to speed up the 3 year recovery, by having The Rift Manipulator yoink him from time after the three years. "Set the manipulator to full power!" Jack shouted, Mickey slammed a lever, Gwen shoved a plug in its socket, and there was a flash, the team fell back, and ianto appeared on the autopsy table, Jack began walking down, "Ianto, take this!" Jack shouted, and Ianto climbed up, "Who are you... oh, like the coat." Ianto said, "Ianto, eat this, youve been out of action for years, so itll revive your spritit," Gwen said, putting a small pill in his mouth. Then there was a blast on the table, Gwen fell back, A Timelord like figure walked down the stairs, "Who are you?" Jack Said, "I can tell you are timelord by them robes, so you are from before the war, so we can dissect you and get away with it." Mickey said, "I am the castellean! Im on the high council!" He shouted. "Probe him!" Jack shouted, "No! Not the mind probe!" He shouted, "Let him live!" Mickey shouted, "He is set to die in the future, also, when he is escaping from a probe." Mickey finished.
In the Hub, The Team had decided to speed up the 3 year recovery, by having The Rift Manipulator yoink him from time after the three years. "Set the manipulator to full power!" Jack shouted, Mickey slammed a lever, Gwen shoved a plug in its socket, and there was a flash, the team fell back, and ianto appeared on the autopsy table, Jack began walking down, "Ianto, take this!" Jack shouted, and Ianto climbed up, "Who are you... oh, like the coat." Ianto said, "Ianto, eat this, youve been out of action for years, so itll revive your spritit," Gwen said, putting a small pill in his mouth. Then there was a blast on the table, Gwen fell back, A Timelord like figure walked down the stairs, "Who are you?" Jack Said, "I can tell you are timelord by them robes, so you are from before the war, so we can dissect you and get away with it." Mickey said, "I am the castellean! Im on the high council!" He shouted. "Probe him!" Jack shouted, "No! Not the mind probe!" He shouted, "Let him live!" Mickey shouted, "He is set to die in the future, also, when he is escaping from a probe." Mickey finished.
Torchwood XC E4 P2
Jack looked at a table and grinned, he saw his modified webley blaster, with the graske void teleport built on top, he shot at a cup of coffee, and the coffee disindegrated, and Ianto shot jack, and grabbed the gun, he ran to the elevator, and climbed onto it, Gwen stabbed jacks vortex manipulator, and the lift flew up, Ianto prepared to shoot, and then he landed, and saw abomination, Ianto fired, and fired again, and watched the abomination look around to see him, he fired 3 more times, as the abomination roared, and began burning. Ianto climbed off the step, and watched abomination burn up, then gwen, owen, jack and mickey appeared on the step, and looked. But then, Bilis manger appeared, and laughed, he pulled out a pistol. "Put that down!" Ianto Shouted, and ran towards bilis, but Bilis shot, It hit Iantos arm, Ianto gasps, Ianto grabbed Bilis's neck with his other arm, and chucked him down and Jack fired, Bilis died immidiatly. Jack looked behind him, Ianto was on the step, going down, and jack quickly followed.
Owen was looking at iantos arm, and coughed. "What the hell... some kind of black smoke!" He shouted. "Spiritual Tachyon energy, created by storing someones spirit in a body which has witnessed timetravel, or been involved in timetravel." Jack Said, "Mr Saxon." He finished. "You mean the prime minister who suddenly vanished from existance?" Owen said, but then Ianto grabbed owens throat, and chucked him down to the autopsy room, which was meters away, owen fell down in the place tosh died. Owen gasped, and Jack ran down to him, Gwen and mickey pointed guns at Ianto, "Ianto, you are under arrest!" Gwen shouted. Ianto laughed, "I am not ianto, and..." ianto vanished, and reappeared with blood all over him, "I am Bilis Manger, hows rhys gwen?!" He laughed, and Gwen grabbed her mobile, and flipped it open, "RHYS!" She shouted, and began to cry." Bilis/Ianto laughed, and grabbed here, and teleported.
They landed on the edge of a tall building, "Cya Gwen!" He said and pushed, Gwen staggered, and wobbled on the edge, Ianto jump kicked, Gwen dodged and pulled out a pistol and shot ianto, ianto teleported infront of her, and Gwen spun and punched, Ianto grabbed her hand, and she vanished, reappearing near the edge, she gasped, and Ianto pushed, Gwen Dodged and pushed down Ianto. Jack appeared with his vortex manipulator at the bottom of the building, and saw gwen fighting. Ianto laughed and put a pistol against Gwens head.
Owen was looking at iantos arm, and coughed. "What the hell... some kind of black smoke!" He shouted. "Spiritual Tachyon energy, created by storing someones spirit in a body which has witnessed timetravel, or been involved in timetravel." Jack Said, "Mr Saxon." He finished. "You mean the prime minister who suddenly vanished from existance?" Owen said, but then Ianto grabbed owens throat, and chucked him down to the autopsy room, which was meters away, owen fell down in the place tosh died. Owen gasped, and Jack ran down to him, Gwen and mickey pointed guns at Ianto, "Ianto, you are under arrest!" Gwen shouted. Ianto laughed, "I am not ianto, and..." ianto vanished, and reappeared with blood all over him, "I am Bilis Manger, hows rhys gwen?!" He laughed, and Gwen grabbed her mobile, and flipped it open, "RHYS!" She shouted, and began to cry." Bilis/Ianto laughed, and grabbed here, and teleported.
They landed on the edge of a tall building, "Cya Gwen!" He said and pushed, Gwen staggered, and wobbled on the edge, Ianto jump kicked, Gwen dodged and pulled out a pistol and shot ianto, ianto teleported infront of her, and Gwen spun and punched, Ianto grabbed her hand, and she vanished, reappearing near the edge, she gasped, and Ianto pushed, Gwen Dodged and pushed down Ianto. Jack appeared with his vortex manipulator at the bottom of the building, and saw gwen fighting. Ianto laughed and put a pistol against Gwens head.
Friday, 22 August 2008
Clomic Wars
Jedidude1023 has asked me if he could do a comic version of our clone wars, and sent this preview strip saying it will start in a few weeks. He said also just to do this post to alert you and not to show the preview.
Saturday, 16 August 2008
Mr Pretzel. Chapter One
This is the story sent to simon to go onto the site, along with the third in the toad series (the one after next) and it involves mr pretzel in a race against time to stop dr. yes, with his t.d.s time machine. oh, and his best freinds a talking pie!
Chapter one!
mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car.
In the secret lab 10 miles south of the a98, a door spun open, a man walked in, guarded, "Doctor, time has changed!" it is rippling up, time will be consumed! i f eel like its getting to me... hes stopping me kill my dad... he stopping me getting out from prison! stopping me joining you....." he shouted, and burnt up, the man at the other end of the lab thought carefully.
the pretzel and pie pressed buttons on the modified dashboard, then mr pretzel hits the accelorate, they speed forwards, and there is a flash of green light, mr pretzel screams, and they hit the breaks. They look outside the window, "2314" mr pie says, and climbs out. "2314" he said, and climbed out, and climbed back in, "2314" he said again, and climbed back out, then in again, and kept repeating, then they went back in time, back to 2033, then, they went back to the future, "2314!" mr pie said, and then climbed out. There was a huge explosion, the buildings all collapsed, the people turned to tramps, and time changed, pie turned round, and saw the car turn into a soap box race car. "Time is changing!" mr Pie shouted, and looked up, the sky turned red. pretzel screamed "noo!" and jumped into the soap box, he looked and saw the same dashboard, and he sped back to the past, he landed in his workshop, and saw it had been burnt down, and mr pie was building his soap box racer time machine, then he looked up, and saw himself and mr pretzel, "What..." he said, and the version building burnt, followed by the current version and then mr pretzel. Mr pretzel found himself back on the floor later, then ran up to some controls, "wierd dream!" he said, mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car. "What... time loop!" Pretzel shouted,
Chapter one!
mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car.
In the secret lab 10 miles south of the a98, a door spun open, a man walked in, guarded, "Doctor, time has changed!" it is rippling up, time will be consumed! i f eel like its getting to me... hes stopping me kill my dad... he stopping me getting out from prison! stopping me joining you....." he shouted, and burnt up, the man at the other end of the lab thought carefully.
the pretzel and pie pressed buttons on the modified dashboard, then mr pretzel hits the accelorate, they speed forwards, and there is a flash of green light, mr pretzel screams, and they hit the breaks. They look outside the window, "2314" mr pie says, and climbs out. "2314" he said, and climbed out, and climbed back in, "2314" he said again, and climbed back out, then in again, and kept repeating, then they went back in time, back to 2033, then, they went back to the future, "2314!" mr pie said, and then climbed out. There was a huge explosion, the buildings all collapsed, the people turned to tramps, and time changed, pie turned round, and saw the car turn into a soap box race car. "Time is changing!" mr Pie shouted, and looked up, the sky turned red. pretzel screamed "noo!" and jumped into the soap box, he looked and saw the same dashboard, and he sped back to the past, he landed in his workshop, and saw it had been burnt down, and mr pie was building his soap box racer time machine, then he looked up, and saw himself and mr pretzel, "What..." he said, and the version building burnt, followed by the current version and then mr pretzel. Mr pretzel found himself back on the floor later, then ran up to some controls, "wierd dream!" he said, mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car. "What... time loop!" Pretzel shouted,
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