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Sunday 8 June 2008

Clone Wars ep1

This is a fan fic that Pete Smith wrote for the site, him and a few of his freinds and people who want to help him are doing it. It is about the Clone Wars, in the first year, this episode is about Commander Thire's troops escaping Geonosis, and the 501st Commander Apalna Trying to retreive A Holocron with information on the death star on it.

Scene 1: Commander Thires Ship

Thire: Squad, Prepare for a rough landing.

An Explosion hits the ship, "

Clone Pilot: Commander! Weve lost the engeines, we'll hit the ground at terminal velocity!

Thire: all power to front Turbo sheilds, deactivate everthing to put all power to front Turbo!

A blue glow surrounds the ship,

Thire: Troopers, Saftey Posistions!

Scene 2: Above The Ship

The ship zooms into view, and speeds down, they hit the ground

Scene 3: outside the ship

Commander Thire and his troopers climb out, The Pilot comes out last

Thire: We need to Get to apalnas Squad,

Scene 4: Geonosis Factory

Some 501st Soldiers are shooting down Geonosions, The Commander has a badly injured arm, and a Clone Medic is stood next to him, he shoots at a geonosian but the geonosian blast destroys his pistol

Apalna: We need to get to the hangar, Dooku is escaping!

A Geonosian lands next to him, he punches it, and grabs the gun, and fires at some geonosians, they all die on the spot.

Apalna: Get the guns, kill as many as possible, and get to the hangar!

Apalna Runs to a door, and shoots the control panels, the door slams open, "

Apalna: Quickly!

The 3 survivors and Apalna get to the door, and climb threw, Apalna shoots the panle on the other side, and the door slams shut, They look round, and see count dooku.

Clone #1: Destroy the ship!

Dooku: No!

Dooku ignites his saber, but the ceiling collapses on his ship, trapping the five there

Clone Medic: Were Trapped!

Scene 5: Other side of the rock fall

Thires Troopers Arrive,

Thire: Detonate the Rocks,

Scene 6: the first side

Dooku is fighting the Four Clones, Clone #2 is dead, so theres online Clone #1, Medic and Apalna Left

Thire: (oov) Fire!

Dooku: Wha-at!

Dooku Turns round and is blasted back by the blast, Thires Squad walk out, and Apalna Grabs Dookus Lightsaber, Thire puts his pistol on Dookus Neck,

Thire: We need that holocron, Weve had information that it destroys planets, give it to us or we will kill you,

suddenly droids burst threw on the other side, and blast Thire, Thires Medic comes up to him, while the un injured Clones fight the droids, Dooku laughs and runs off, but drops the holocron, Apalna Blasts the Holocron, but a droid blasts his face, paralyzing him.

Thire: Troops, Retreat!

Thires 7 surviving squad members (4 clones, 1 pilot, one medic and Thire) and Apalnas 3 survivors (Medic, Apalna and 1 clone) Run, and Yoda bursts through the door, spinning in the air and avoiding Geonosion and Droid Blasters chops down half of the army in 17 seconds, giving the team a chance to run, 2 of thires members got blasted, as they got out

Scene 7: Outside

Commander Codys Squad Run up

Cody: Did you get the holocron?

Apalna: No, We Destroyed it,

Thire: We need Transport!

Cody: I Have enough room for the 6 of you in my gunship, General Yoda has Order for your troops to retreat to coruscant, Order 32

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