Sunday 31 August 2008
100th visits!
Hi, we now have 100 visitors. Please tell people this to get us more. Then you get a reward. Ps, The Story compitition is coming soon, so start planning a story to enter. Must be around upto 3 pages. Must be under Pg-13 to be shown online.
Friday 29 August 2008
Tales of Terror!
Hi, Whovian man from Whocrazy, our partner site, aka we share cboxes, has been making these films, and we have agreed to have them published here aswell as his youtube channel. This is episode one. This is his discription on the Youtube channel:
The first episode in a series of short horror stories. I apologise for the bad quality of some shots, eg. background noises, people in the way. Also, this is Linda's first acting job, so, please be nice.
Even though this isn't great, don't give up on the series yet, it's going to get much much better.
Enjoy:
The first episode in a series of short horror stories. I apologise for the bad quality of some shots, eg. background noises, people in the way. Also, this is Linda's first acting job, so, please be nice.
Even though this isn't great, don't give up on the series yet, it's going to get much much better.
Enjoy:
THE MAN IN THE MIRROR
Thursday 28 August 2008
Dalekkid19092's Clone Wars Spin off: Order 66
Scene 1: Ship
Thire is with some new troops, with his memories put back into his head, he is with a jedi master, Claro Tewar, who is pulling on a space helmet, since he cannot survive in starfighter conditions, he is a gungan.
Claro: Hey, Mesa ready for battle thiresa.
Thire: Ok, im setting my troops to prepare, You can Head off
Claro jumps into his ship, a white and red modified ep 3. He flies out the hangar,
Scene 2: Space
The modified is flying threw space, shooting at the seperatist base and he sends a torpedo at the bridge, it hits,
Claro: Bullseye!
he shoots into the hangar sheildtransmitter, then topedoes into the hangar, blowing it, up, then his engines burst up, fire from behind, he looks, freindly, fire, then it hits again, his engines stop, and he begins to plummet down, and finaly lands on a moon. He climbs out, and ignites his lightsaber, clone and droid forces are racing to the moon, he screams, and a torpedo hits him, blowing the moon up.
Scene 3: Another planet, middle off a battle feild
A selkath jedi master is chopping down droids with his double edged green lighsaber, then a clone blast hits him, he turns round, the commander fires at him, knocking the lighsaber back, and it slices his arm off, then he closes his eyes. A bith jedi master watches in horror and runs to his starfighter, He flies off.
Scene 4: Kashyyk
Jedi master luminara is with commander gree and a wookie, then a Clone scout runs up to him, and nods, they pull out guns, and fire at the wookie, the wookie falls down dead, and luminara strikes at the scout, who falls down with his head chopped in half, and Commander gree shoots again and Luminara drops here lightsaber, and falls off the dome she is in. Gree walks through to another dome, and nods at a scout, they approach yoda, who jumps up and spins, theyre heads fall down, then the bodies. Yoda runs off.
Subtitle: 5 years later
A small group of wookies are huddled round a fire, and in the background show everything burnt down, Then, A Early version of a imperial shuttle lands, A group of clones climb out and fire at the wookies, The wookies shoot back and one roars, and grabs the Storms, and jumps, and kicks the leader in the face, he is dragged off by a commander clone, and is thrown into the shuttle, The storm clones shoot down the remaining wookies, the ship begins to fly, but then spins round into a tree, exploding, A wookie jumps out, followed by some imperials, and they fight, until the wookie is stunned, and is dragged in.
Scene 6: Ma'ar Shaddam
A Jedi Starfighter lands next to a workshop, an armoury, with Mandalorian type armour, A Bith Jedi gets out the starfighter, the same one as before, but scarred, and his ship burnt. He walks up to them, and points at a Armour similar to a clones, but modified,
Bith: (Huttese) Che copah? (English) Price?
Merchant: (Huttese) Goba Jujumon So Ahh (English) 157 Credits.
Bith: (Huttese) An Dyst? (Human) And Ship?
Merchant: (Huttese) Bo Donocha So Ahh! (human) 224 Credits.
Bith: (huttese) Poodoo! (En) -censored-
Bith reaches for his lightsaber, and switches it on
Bith: (HTS) La pim nallya so bata de wompa, Mikiyuna! Pasta mo rulya! Do bata gee mwaa tusawa! (EN) I will get back to you on that one, hands off your weapons and back up against the bar!
Merchant: (Hts) Kava doompa Jeedi stoopa! (en) Youre a Jedi Fool!
The bith uses the force to throw his starfighter at the workshop, and it sets it alight, The Merchants are backed against the wall, and the fire sets them alight, he lifts his hand infront of the merchants face, and the merchant, falls back, and rushes inside, coming out with some armour, and points at a starfighter, Davaab Type, mandalorian, The bith nods,
Merchant: (HTS) Yuna Puna! (EN) First Class!
The bith nods again and begins to shake hands with the Merchant, and then ignites his lightsaber again, and puts it in the merchants neck, the merchant falls, the bith nods again, and opens the box, The helmet was similar to a early Swamp troopers helmet, and the armour was mandalorian, and it had a Modified Kashyyyk Stalker, and a Dc-19 twin blaster, He pulled on the helmet, then climbed into the mandalorian armour, He shot at the ground, it made a explosion good enough to collapse a small building. He put the helmet on his dash board on his ship, and flew up. Suddenly a laser hit the ship. He spun, 2 early versions of the Modified ties for the Emporers guards, he checked his hyperdrive, it had been hit, he hit the dashboard, and loop-de-looped, and the homing missiles missed, and he flew in a loop round the ties, but he was hit by the missiles, and it hit the cockpit, he was knocked out, and flew away, fought dead by the ties.
Thire is with some new troops, with his memories put back into his head, he is with a jedi master, Claro Tewar, who is pulling on a space helmet, since he cannot survive in starfighter conditions, he is a gungan.
Claro: Hey, Mesa ready for battle thiresa.
Thire: Ok, im setting my troops to prepare, You can Head off
Claro jumps into his ship, a white and red modified ep 3. He flies out the hangar,
Scene 2: Space
The modified is flying threw space, shooting at the seperatist base and he sends a torpedo at the bridge, it hits,
Claro: Bullseye!
he shoots into the hangar sheildtransmitter, then topedoes into the hangar, blowing it, up, then his engines burst up, fire from behind, he looks, freindly, fire, then it hits again, his engines stop, and he begins to plummet down, and finaly lands on a moon. He climbs out, and ignites his lightsaber, clone and droid forces are racing to the moon, he screams, and a torpedo hits him, blowing the moon up.
Scene 3: Another planet, middle off a battle feild
A selkath jedi master is chopping down droids with his double edged green lighsaber, then a clone blast hits him, he turns round, the commander fires at him, knocking the lighsaber back, and it slices his arm off, then he closes his eyes. A bith jedi master watches in horror and runs to his starfighter, He flies off.
Scene 4: Kashyyk
Jedi master luminara is with commander gree and a wookie, then a Clone scout runs up to him, and nods, they pull out guns, and fire at the wookie, the wookie falls down dead, and luminara strikes at the scout, who falls down with his head chopped in half, and Commander gree shoots again and Luminara drops here lightsaber, and falls off the dome she is in. Gree walks through to another dome, and nods at a scout, they approach yoda, who jumps up and spins, theyre heads fall down, then the bodies. Yoda runs off.
Subtitle: 5 years later
A small group of wookies are huddled round a fire, and in the background show everything burnt down, Then, A Early version of a imperial shuttle lands, A group of clones climb out and fire at the wookies, The wookies shoot back and one roars, and grabs the Storms, and jumps, and kicks the leader in the face, he is dragged off by a commander clone, and is thrown into the shuttle, The storm clones shoot down the remaining wookies, the ship begins to fly, but then spins round into a tree, exploding, A wookie jumps out, followed by some imperials, and they fight, until the wookie is stunned, and is dragged in.
Scene 6: Ma'ar Shaddam
A Jedi Starfighter lands next to a workshop, an armoury, with Mandalorian type armour, A Bith Jedi gets out the starfighter, the same one as before, but scarred, and his ship burnt. He walks up to them, and points at a Armour similar to a clones, but modified,
Bith: (Huttese) Che copah? (English) Price?
Merchant: (Huttese) Goba Jujumon So Ahh (English) 157 Credits.
Bith: (Huttese) An Dyst? (Human) And Ship?
Merchant: (Huttese) Bo Donocha So Ahh! (human) 224 Credits.
Bith: (huttese) Poodoo! (En) -censored-
Bith reaches for his lightsaber, and switches it on
Bith: (HTS) La pim nallya so bata de wompa, Mikiyuna! Pasta mo rulya! Do bata gee mwaa tusawa! (EN) I will get back to you on that one, hands off your weapons and back up against the bar!
Merchant: (Hts) Kava doompa Jeedi stoopa! (en) Youre a Jedi Fool!
The bith uses the force to throw his starfighter at the workshop, and it sets it alight, The Merchants are backed against the wall, and the fire sets them alight, he lifts his hand infront of the merchants face, and the merchant, falls back, and rushes inside, coming out with some armour, and points at a starfighter, Davaab Type, mandalorian, The bith nods,
Merchant: (HTS) Yuna Puna! (EN) First Class!
The bith nods again and begins to shake hands with the Merchant, and then ignites his lightsaber again, and puts it in the merchants neck, the merchant falls, the bith nods again, and opens the box, The helmet was similar to a early Swamp troopers helmet, and the armour was mandalorian, and it had a Modified Kashyyyk Stalker, and a Dc-19 twin blaster, He pulled on the helmet, then climbed into the mandalorian armour, He shot at the ground, it made a explosion good enough to collapse a small building. He put the helmet on his dash board on his ship, and flew up. Suddenly a laser hit the ship. He spun, 2 early versions of the Modified ties for the Emporers guards, he checked his hyperdrive, it had been hit, he hit the dashboard, and loop-de-looped, and the homing missiles missed, and he flew in a loop round the ties, but he was hit by the missiles, and it hit the cockpit, he was knocked out, and flew away, fought dead by the ties.
Monday 25 August 2008
Torchwood XC E4 P3
At the top Mickey appeared and grabbed Ianto, "Cya Gwen." Mickey said, and pulled ianto of the edge with him, "NO!" Gwen shouted, Then they reappeared next to gwen, with ianto having mickey in a headlock. Jac and owen burst threw the door, "Am I late?" Jack Said, and punched ianto, "Sorry ianto" Jack said, and wiped his eye, and pulled open iantos mouth, and shoved in 2 small pill like objects, "Retcon, will remove all traces of bilis from him. But its a overdose, the only amount strong enough to stop him, and itll make him out of action for months to recover." Jack said, and they watched the black gas leave Ianto, Ianto slumped, and slipped off the edge, falling, Jack hit his manipulator, and landed in time to catch ianto, but squashed himself. He revived screaming a second later.
In the Hub, The Team had decided to speed up the 3 year recovery, by having The Rift Manipulator yoink him from time after the three years. "Set the manipulator to full power!" Jack shouted, Mickey slammed a lever, Gwen shoved a plug in its socket, and there was a flash, the team fell back, and ianto appeared on the autopsy table, Jack began walking down, "Ianto, take this!" Jack shouted, and Ianto climbed up, "Who are you... oh, like the coat." Ianto said, "Ianto, eat this, youve been out of action for years, so itll revive your spritit," Gwen said, putting a small pill in his mouth. Then there was a blast on the table, Gwen fell back, A Timelord like figure walked down the stairs, "Who are you?" Jack Said, "I can tell you are timelord by them robes, so you are from before the war, so we can dissect you and get away with it." Mickey said, "I am the castellean! Im on the high council!" He shouted. "Probe him!" Jack shouted, "No! Not the mind probe!" He shouted, "Let him live!" Mickey shouted, "He is set to die in the future, also, when he is escaping from a probe." Mickey finished.
In the Hub, The Team had decided to speed up the 3 year recovery, by having The Rift Manipulator yoink him from time after the three years. "Set the manipulator to full power!" Jack shouted, Mickey slammed a lever, Gwen shoved a plug in its socket, and there was a flash, the team fell back, and ianto appeared on the autopsy table, Jack began walking down, "Ianto, take this!" Jack shouted, and Ianto climbed up, "Who are you... oh, like the coat." Ianto said, "Ianto, eat this, youve been out of action for years, so itll revive your spritit," Gwen said, putting a small pill in his mouth. Then there was a blast on the table, Gwen fell back, A Timelord like figure walked down the stairs, "Who are you?" Jack Said, "I can tell you are timelord by them robes, so you are from before the war, so we can dissect you and get away with it." Mickey said, "I am the castellean! Im on the high council!" He shouted. "Probe him!" Jack shouted, "No! Not the mind probe!" He shouted, "Let him live!" Mickey shouted, "He is set to die in the future, also, when he is escaping from a probe." Mickey finished.
Torchwood XC E4 P2
Jack looked at a table and grinned, he saw his modified webley blaster, with the graske void teleport built on top, he shot at a cup of coffee, and the coffee disindegrated, and Ianto shot jack, and grabbed the gun, he ran to the elevator, and climbed onto it, Gwen stabbed jacks vortex manipulator, and the lift flew up, Ianto prepared to shoot, and then he landed, and saw abomination, Ianto fired, and fired again, and watched the abomination look around to see him, he fired 3 more times, as the abomination roared, and began burning. Ianto climbed off the step, and watched abomination burn up, then gwen, owen, jack and mickey appeared on the step, and looked. But then, Bilis manger appeared, and laughed, he pulled out a pistol. "Put that down!" Ianto Shouted, and ran towards bilis, but Bilis shot, It hit Iantos arm, Ianto gasps, Ianto grabbed Bilis's neck with his other arm, and chucked him down and Jack fired, Bilis died immidiatly. Jack looked behind him, Ianto was on the step, going down, and jack quickly followed.
Owen was looking at iantos arm, and coughed. "What the hell... some kind of black smoke!" He shouted. "Spiritual Tachyon energy, created by storing someones spirit in a body which has witnessed timetravel, or been involved in timetravel." Jack Said, "Mr Saxon." He finished. "You mean the prime minister who suddenly vanished from existance?" Owen said, but then Ianto grabbed owens throat, and chucked him down to the autopsy room, which was meters away, owen fell down in the place tosh died. Owen gasped, and Jack ran down to him, Gwen and mickey pointed guns at Ianto, "Ianto, you are under arrest!" Gwen shouted. Ianto laughed, "I am not ianto, and..." ianto vanished, and reappeared with blood all over him, "I am Bilis Manger, hows rhys gwen?!" He laughed, and Gwen grabbed her mobile, and flipped it open, "RHYS!" She shouted, and began to cry." Bilis/Ianto laughed, and grabbed here, and teleported.
They landed on the edge of a tall building, "Cya Gwen!" He said and pushed, Gwen staggered, and wobbled on the edge, Ianto jump kicked, Gwen dodged and pulled out a pistol and shot ianto, ianto teleported infront of her, and Gwen spun and punched, Ianto grabbed her hand, and she vanished, reappearing near the edge, she gasped, and Ianto pushed, Gwen Dodged and pushed down Ianto. Jack appeared with his vortex manipulator at the bottom of the building, and saw gwen fighting. Ianto laughed and put a pistol against Gwens head.
Owen was looking at iantos arm, and coughed. "What the hell... some kind of black smoke!" He shouted. "Spiritual Tachyon energy, created by storing someones spirit in a body which has witnessed timetravel, or been involved in timetravel." Jack Said, "Mr Saxon." He finished. "You mean the prime minister who suddenly vanished from existance?" Owen said, but then Ianto grabbed owens throat, and chucked him down to the autopsy room, which was meters away, owen fell down in the place tosh died. Owen gasped, and Jack ran down to him, Gwen and mickey pointed guns at Ianto, "Ianto, you are under arrest!" Gwen shouted. Ianto laughed, "I am not ianto, and..." ianto vanished, and reappeared with blood all over him, "I am Bilis Manger, hows rhys gwen?!" He laughed, and Gwen grabbed her mobile, and flipped it open, "RHYS!" She shouted, and began to cry." Bilis/Ianto laughed, and grabbed here, and teleported.
They landed on the edge of a tall building, "Cya Gwen!" He said and pushed, Gwen staggered, and wobbled on the edge, Ianto jump kicked, Gwen dodged and pulled out a pistol and shot ianto, ianto teleported infront of her, and Gwen spun and punched, Ianto grabbed her hand, and she vanished, reappearing near the edge, she gasped, and Ianto pushed, Gwen Dodged and pushed down Ianto. Jack appeared with his vortex manipulator at the bottom of the building, and saw gwen fighting. Ianto laughed and put a pistol against Gwens head.
Friday 22 August 2008
Clomic Wars
Jedidude1023 has asked me if he could do a comic version of our clone wars, and sent this preview strip saying it will start in a few weeks. He said also just to do this post to alert you and not to show the preview.
Saturday 16 August 2008
Mr Pretzel. Chapter One
This is the story sent to simon to go onto the site, along with the third in the toad series (the one after next) and it involves mr pretzel in a race against time to stop dr. yes, with his t.d.s time machine. oh, and his best freinds a talking pie!
Chapter one!
mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car.
In the secret lab 10 miles south of the a98, a door spun open, a man walked in, guarded, "Doctor, time has changed!" it is rippling up, time will be consumed! i f eel like its getting to me... hes stopping me kill my dad... he stopping me getting out from prison! stopping me joining you....." he shouted, and burnt up, the man at the other end of the lab thought carefully.
the pretzel and pie pressed buttons on the modified dashboard, then mr pretzel hits the accelorate, they speed forwards, and there is a flash of green light, mr pretzel screams, and they hit the breaks. They look outside the window, "2314" mr pie says, and climbs out. "2314" he said, and climbed out, and climbed back in, "2314" he said again, and climbed back out, then in again, and kept repeating, then they went back in time, back to 2033, then, they went back to the future, "2314!" mr pie said, and then climbed out. There was a huge explosion, the buildings all collapsed, the people turned to tramps, and time changed, pie turned round, and saw the car turn into a soap box race car. "Time is changing!" mr Pie shouted, and looked up, the sky turned red. pretzel screamed "noo!" and jumped into the soap box, he looked and saw the same dashboard, and he sped back to the past, he landed in his workshop, and saw it had been burnt down, and mr pie was building his soap box racer time machine, then he looked up, and saw himself and mr pretzel, "What..." he said, and the version building burnt, followed by the current version and then mr pretzel. Mr pretzel found himself back on the floor later, then ran up to some controls, "wierd dream!" he said, mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car. "What... time loop!" Pretzel shouted,
Chapter one!
mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car.
In the secret lab 10 miles south of the a98, a door spun open, a man walked in, guarded, "Doctor, time has changed!" it is rippling up, time will be consumed! i f eel like its getting to me... hes stopping me kill my dad... he stopping me getting out from prison! stopping me joining you....." he shouted, and burnt up, the man at the other end of the lab thought carefully.
the pretzel and pie pressed buttons on the modified dashboard, then mr pretzel hits the accelorate, they speed forwards, and there is a flash of green light, mr pretzel screams, and they hit the breaks. They look outside the window, "2314" mr pie says, and climbs out. "2314" he said, and climbed out, and climbed back in, "2314" he said again, and climbed back out, then in again, and kept repeating, then they went back in time, back to 2033, then, they went back to the future, "2314!" mr pie said, and then climbed out. There was a huge explosion, the buildings all collapsed, the people turned to tramps, and time changed, pie turned round, and saw the car turn into a soap box race car. "Time is changing!" mr Pie shouted, and looked up, the sky turned red. pretzel screamed "noo!" and jumped into the soap box, he looked and saw the same dashboard, and he sped back to the past, he landed in his workshop, and saw it had been burnt down, and mr pie was building his soap box racer time machine, then he looked up, and saw himself and mr pretzel, "What..." he said, and the version building burnt, followed by the current version and then mr pretzel. Mr pretzel found himself back on the floor later, then ran up to some controls, "wierd dream!" he said, mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car. "What... time loop!" Pretzel shouted,
Friday 15 August 2008
Clone Wars: The Complete Saga!
Scene 1: Commander Thires Ship
Thire: Squad, Prepare for a rough landing.
An Explosion hits the ship, "
Clone Pilot: Commander! Weve lost the engeines, we'll hit the ground at terminal velocity!
Thire: all power to front Turbo sheilds, deactivate everthing to put all power to front Turbo!
A blue glow surrounds the ship,
Thire: Troopers, Saftey Posistions!
Scene 2: Above The Ship
The ship zooms into view, and speeds down, they hit the ground
Scene 3: outside the ship
Commander Thire and his troopers climb out, The Pilot comes out last
Thire: We need to Get to apalnas Squad,
Scene 4: Geonosis Factory
Some 501st Soldiers are shooting down Geonosions, The Commander has a badly injured arm, and a Clone Medic is stood next to him, he shoots at a geonosian but the geonosian blast destroys his pistol
Apalna: We need to get to the hangar, Dooku is escaping!
A Geonosian lands next to him, he punches it, and grabs the gun, and fires at some geonosians, they all die on the spot.
Apalna: Get the guns, kill as many as possible, and get to the hangar!
Apalna Runs to a door, and shoots the control panels, the door slams open, "
Apalna: Quickly!
The 3 survivors and Apalna get to the door, and climb threw, Apalna shoots the panle on the other side, and the door slams shut, They look round, and see count dooku.
Clone #1: Destroy the ship!
Dooku: No!
Dooku ignites his saber, but the ceiling collapses on his ship, trapping the five there
Clone Medic: Were Trapped!
Scene 5: Other side of the rock fall
Thires Troopers Arrive,
Thire: Detonate the Rocks,
Scene 6: the first side
Dooku is fighting the Four Clones, Clone #2 is dead, so theres online Clone #1, Medic and Apalna Left
Thire: (oov) Fire!
Dooku: Wha-at!
Dooku Turns round and is blasted back by the blast, Thires Squad walk out, and Apalna Grabs Dookus Lightsaber, Thire puts his pistol on Dookus Neck,
Thire: We need that holocron, Weve had information that it destroys planets, give it to us or we will kill you,
suddenly droids burst threw on the other side, and blast Thire, Thires Medic comes up to him, while the un injured Clones fight the droids, Dooku laughs and runs off, but drops the holocron, Apalna Blasts the Holocron, but a droid blasts his face, paralyzing him.
Thire: Troops, Retreat!
Thires 7 surviving squad members (4 clones, 1 pilot, one medic and Thire) and Apalnas 3 survivors (Medic, Apalna and 1 clone) Run, and Yoda bursts through the door, spinning in the air and avoiding Geonosion and Droid Blasters chops down half of the army in 17 seconds, giving the team a chance to run, 2 of thires members got blasted, as they got out
Scene 7: Outside
Commander Codys Squad Run up
Cody: Did you get the holocron?
Apalna: No, We Destroyed it,
Thire: We need Transport!
Cody: I Have enough room for the 6 of you in my gunship, General Yoda has Order for your troops to retreat to coruscant, Order 32
Thire: Squad, Prepare for a rough landing.
An Explosion hits the ship, "
Clone Pilot: Commander! Weve lost the engeines, we'll hit the ground at terminal velocity!
Thire: all power to front Turbo sheilds, deactivate everthing to put all power to front Turbo!
A blue glow surrounds the ship,
Thire: Troopers, Saftey Posistions!
Scene 2: Above The Ship
The ship zooms into view, and speeds down, they hit the ground
Scene 3: outside the ship
Commander Thire and his troopers climb out, The Pilot comes out last
Thire: We need to Get to apalnas Squad,
Scene 4: Geonosis Factory
Some 501st Soldiers are shooting down Geonosions, The Commander has a badly injured arm, and a Clone Medic is stood next to him, he shoots at a geonosian but the geonosian blast destroys his pistol
Apalna: We need to get to the hangar, Dooku is escaping!
A Geonosian lands next to him, he punches it, and grabs the gun, and fires at some geonosians, they all die on the spot.
Apalna: Get the guns, kill as many as possible, and get to the hangar!
Apalna Runs to a door, and shoots the control panels, the door slams open, "
Apalna: Quickly!
The 3 survivors and Apalna get to the door, and climb threw, Apalna shoots the panle on the other side, and the door slams shut, They look round, and see count dooku.
Clone #1: Destroy the ship!
Dooku: No!
Dooku ignites his saber, but the ceiling collapses on his ship, trapping the five there
Clone Medic: Were Trapped!
Scene 5: Other side of the rock fall
Thires Troopers Arrive,
Thire: Detonate the Rocks,
Scene 6: the first side
Dooku is fighting the Four Clones, Clone #2 is dead, so theres online Clone #1, Medic and Apalna Left
Thire: (oov) Fire!
Dooku: Wha-at!
Dooku Turns round and is blasted back by the blast, Thires Squad walk out, and Apalna Grabs Dookus Lightsaber, Thire puts his pistol on Dookus Neck,
Thire: We need that holocron, Weve had information that it destroys planets, give it to us or we will kill you,
suddenly droids burst threw on the other side, and blast Thire, Thires Medic comes up to him, while the un injured Clones fight the droids, Dooku laughs and runs off, but drops the holocron, Apalna Blasts the Holocron, but a droid blasts his face, paralyzing him.
Thire: Troops, Retreat!
Thires 7 surviving squad members (4 clones, 1 pilot, one medic and Thire) and Apalnas 3 survivors (Medic, Apalna and 1 clone) Run, and Yoda bursts through the door, spinning in the air and avoiding Geonosion and Droid Blasters chops down half of the army in 17 seconds, giving the team a chance to run, 2 of thires members got blasted, as they got out
Scene 7: Outside
Commander Codys Squad Run up
Cody: Did you get the holocron?
Apalna: No, We Destroyed it,
Thire: We need Transport!
Cody: I Have enough room for the 6 of you in my gunship, General Yoda has Order for your troops to retreat to coruscant, Order 32
Scene 8: Codys Ship
Thire's Troops are Mending their guns, but Apalnas Survivors are healing
Cody: What happened with Tyrannus?
Apalna: We were about to assasinate him, but a rockfall fell on him, and he saw us, the force saved him
Thire: So our squad blasted the rock fall, and tried to Execute Dooku
Apalna: What Caused the Rock Fall?
Cody: We Were shooting at a Droid, I went in to find out what happened,
Medic (A): Commander. Your Troops need to take 3 years off to recover
Apalna: Clones never have days off, Your a Medic, you had the rules programed into you, how can you do that,
Cody: Wait!
Cody Pulls out his pistol and blasts the Helmet Medic, a small stick is coming out with a pod at the end
Cody: Droid!
MedicDroid: Roger!
(A) Clone: Impossible
Apalna Trooper A whips out a battle knife and chops off the neck, it exploads, and a spark ignites the wiring,
Apalna: Thire, Group up, weve lost men, and escape! Cody, Bye!
Apalnas Blue and Green Soldiers and Thires Red Soldiers Jump off, Cody presses a SOS button
Scene 9: Ground
Codys ship crashes into a Cliff. The Troopers climbed up, and saw they had Droidikas Surrounding Them,
Apalna: Cody was a Fake, it was a trap, he tried three times to kill us, He tried to trap us in a cave, use the fake fake Medics explosion to kill us and made us fall into a Droidika pit, or hit that rock
Apalna Hits his Wrist, a small Detonation pack comes out, he drops it on the floor,
Apalna: Destroyers? or Destroyed!
Apalna hits his wrist, and a lightning like pulse zaps through the Droidikas, Apalna Grabs the Explosive Slab and puts it back,
Apalna: Thire, Commandos need this stuff, but shock troopers dont
Thire: Were Designed for worse, Were near the equator so the next Base is a mile away, look,
Points at Horizon, they pull on there jetpacks and zoom to the base
Scene 10: Base
Jedi general Kamorik is stood at a control panel, he is HammerHead, like Roron Corrob, Thire and Apalna Walk up to Him
Kamorik: Commanders, There has been Detected that there a some Cloned Clones who are evil in the army
Apalna: Yes, a Cloned Commander Cody tried to kill us, we only have a soldier left each, and Thire has his medic
Kamorik: You will get new troops soon, we have detected that You are a Clone, Apalna, Since the Real Apalna vanished in the kamino factory, and we lost all life signs. You killed him, you are a clone!
Kamorik uses the force to shatter the Helmet
Apalna: I aint a Clone at all, Im Jako Fett,
Jako laughs and punches Thire, and two pistols come out of his wrist
Jako: I can fire four guns in two places at once now,
Jako points all of his guns at Kamorik, who ignites his saber, but laser sheilds appear in seperate ares of Jakos Body
Jako: Your attacks are all blocked!
Thire's Troops are Mending their guns, but Apalnas Survivors are healing
Cody: What happened with Tyrannus?
Apalna: We were about to assasinate him, but a rockfall fell on him, and he saw us, the force saved him
Thire: So our squad blasted the rock fall, and tried to Execute Dooku
Apalna: What Caused the Rock Fall?
Cody: We Were shooting at a Droid, I went in to find out what happened,
Medic (A): Commander. Your Troops need to take 3 years off to recover
Apalna: Clones never have days off, Your a Medic, you had the rules programed into you, how can you do that,
Cody: Wait!
Cody Pulls out his pistol and blasts the Helmet Medic, a small stick is coming out with a pod at the end
Cody: Droid!
MedicDroid: Roger!
(A) Clone: Impossible
Apalna Trooper A whips out a battle knife and chops off the neck, it exploads, and a spark ignites the wiring,
Apalna: Thire, Group up, weve lost men, and escape! Cody, Bye!
Apalnas Blue and Green Soldiers and Thires Red Soldiers Jump off, Cody presses a SOS button
Scene 9: Ground
Codys ship crashes into a Cliff. The Troopers climbed up, and saw they had Droidikas Surrounding Them,
Apalna: Cody was a Fake, it was a trap, he tried three times to kill us, He tried to trap us in a cave, use the fake fake Medics explosion to kill us and made us fall into a Droidika pit, or hit that rock
Apalna Hits his Wrist, a small Detonation pack comes out, he drops it on the floor,
Apalna: Destroyers? or Destroyed!
Apalna hits his wrist, and a lightning like pulse zaps through the Droidikas, Apalna Grabs the Explosive Slab and puts it back,
Apalna: Thire, Commandos need this stuff, but shock troopers dont
Thire: Were Designed for worse, Were near the equator so the next Base is a mile away, look,
Points at Horizon, they pull on there jetpacks and zoom to the base
Scene 10: Base
Jedi general Kamorik is stood at a control panel, he is HammerHead, like Roron Corrob, Thire and Apalna Walk up to Him
Kamorik: Commanders, There has been Detected that there a some Cloned Clones who are evil in the army
Apalna: Yes, a Cloned Commander Cody tried to kill us, we only have a soldier left each, and Thire has his medic
Kamorik: You will get new troops soon, we have detected that You are a Clone, Apalna, Since the Real Apalna vanished in the kamino factory, and we lost all life signs. You killed him, you are a clone!
Kamorik uses the force to shatter the Helmet
Apalna: I aint a Clone at all, Im Jako Fett,
Jako laughs and punches Thire, and two pistols come out of his wrist
Jako: I can fire four guns in two places at once now,
Jako points all of his guns at Kamorik, who ignites his saber, but laser sheilds appear in seperate ares of Jakos Body
Jako: Your attacks are all blocked!
SPECIAL EPISODE! (Aka the 30th post un-canon random special)
The Three ships were riding away from the observatory, when a voice blasted onto the coms, It was Simon, Toad (writer) and Hitbob. "I know you are meant to be on a Giant adventure, but the site is on 30 posts, You need to go and see mario, then do a special episode!" Toad said. The toad who was in the brigade replied. "Ok." and the ships turned round. On the Observatory, Plo Koon, Mace Windu, The Torchwood Gang, Some Graske, a bunch of lumas, some bees, Count dooku and the cast from all of BFFFB Ran to the center, The grand star left the yellow orb. Then The Twi'lek bounty hunter appeared, who had survived from Mon Calimari, and pulled out a gun. "You are under arreft from the Party orginisation for not inviting me!" She shouted, and the people who were there to party screamed, and ran to the emergancy room, but The toads stayed. "This is a random special un-canonical special episode" Blue said, and took off his glasses, then pressed a button, on them, they turned into a gun, Toadsworth pulled a gun from his cane, and the others pulled out phasers from the bee galaxy.
The Twi'lek laughed, and shot at Toadsworth, "I revived the bomber toads, for a special comeback as my revenge!" The Twi'lek laughed, and a Bee ship landed, the Brigade turned round, and the toad bombers walked out, only 5 of them left from the bomb. They ran up and grabbed Brigade members, then a graske came from around the corner, and shot at the bombers, then the bounty hunter, who fell, and landed on a moon. Bowser was there, "You! the idiot who crossed over into our galaxy, how come you came!" He boomed, "The 30th post party..." She replied, then bowser screamed, and pulled on a jet pack, and flew to the observatory. On the observatory, Toad (charactor) shoots at the graske, pushes it off the edge, and pulls out its gun, fires into the air, and the people celebrating appeared, but then bowser landed, and the people ran back to the emergancy dome, The Toads screamed, and shot at bowser, slowly killing him. Toad jumped onto his back, and pulled back, pulling them both of the observatory, pulling them into a black hole. Then toad jetpacked back, and ran back to the emergancy room, and called the BFFFB cast back out, Then they all started saying bye, but then Toad (writer) landed, did a dance, and shot the BFFFB cast dead, apart from the Mario charactors, and flew off.
The Brigade, walked up to there ships, and flew back into the galaxies.
Here is a sypnosis of the real part 2.
Bowser Jr has been saved, and goes to the brigade for revenge for the malcfunction, With Megaleg mark 2, and this time, he has decided to go for the kill, and destroy all 1-ups on the planet, but first he is destroying Mushroom World, and the Toad Brigade are determined to save their planet, and destroy megalegs, but keep a supply off 1-ups in their pockets.
The Twi'lek laughed, and shot at Toadsworth, "I revived the bomber toads, for a special comeback as my revenge!" The Twi'lek laughed, and a Bee ship landed, the Brigade turned round, and the toad bombers walked out, only 5 of them left from the bomb. They ran up and grabbed Brigade members, then a graske came from around the corner, and shot at the bombers, then the bounty hunter, who fell, and landed on a moon. Bowser was there, "You! the idiot who crossed over into our galaxy, how come you came!" He boomed, "The 30th post party..." She replied, then bowser screamed, and pulled on a jet pack, and flew to the observatory. On the observatory, Toad (charactor) shoots at the graske, pushes it off the edge, and pulls out its gun, fires into the air, and the people celebrating appeared, but then bowser landed, and the people ran back to the emergancy dome, The Toads screamed, and shot at bowser, slowly killing him. Toad jumped onto his back, and pulled back, pulling them both of the observatory, pulling them into a black hole. Then toad jetpacked back, and ran back to the emergancy room, and called the BFFFB cast back out, Then they all started saying bye, but then Toad (writer) landed, did a dance, and shot the BFFFB cast dead, apart from the Mario charactors, and flew off.
The Brigade, walked up to there ships, and flew back into the galaxies.
Here is a sypnosis of the real part 2.
Bowser Jr has been saved, and goes to the brigade for revenge for the malcfunction, With Megaleg mark 2, and this time, he has decided to go for the kill, and destroy all 1-ups on the planet, but first he is destroying Mushroom World, and the Toad Brigade are determined to save their planet, and destroy megalegs, but keep a supply off 1-ups in their pockets.
50 VISITS!
I set up a hit counter 2 days ago, and i have 50 visits already! thats half way to 100! Thats 25ish a day! 
Thursday 14 August 2008
Part One!
The StarShroom was flying away from the Observatory with Blue Piloting and they decided to start their scans by the Tech Planet, where Mario said he destroyed Bowser Jrs. Megaleg. He Said before he went onto the Tech planet, he was on a planet with tons of star bits and bullet bills. Toad had Decided this might mean there would be traces of stars. Then, BOOM. A Bullet Bill hit the Ship, and The toads looked out a window, and saw Bowser Jrs Ship malcfunctioning, and it flew off. Their ship had just had its engines blasted, making them malcfunction, "AARRRGGGHH!" Yellow shouted, as he woke up. The Ship flew out of control, "Its activated the Hyperdrives!" Purple Shouted, as the ship sped along a blue-ish space stream.
On The HoneyStar Galaxy, A Bee Ran to the queen bee, who was massive. "Buzz! Mistress! Toad SpaceCraft are heading to our Galaxy! Buzz!" He shouted. "Take the Leaders of the Invading Army and bring them to me, and scavenge the Space Craft, and steal the technolodgy to improve our ships. And use it to prepare for Galactic Domination!" She Replied, and burst into a evil laugh.
The SpaceShroom's crashed down, and landed in a big honeycomb. The Bee who alerted the Mistress flew up to them, and buzzed, pointing at the SpaceShroom. They buzzed, and pulled out phasers. Yellow climbed out, and saw the bees. "Toad, We are back in HoneyComb galaxy. and we are stuck in honey." He shouted, then a laser hit him, knocking him out. Toad pulled out a small pistol, and climbed out, and fired at the Bees, but the Leader buzzed up to him. "Buzz! You are attempting to take this planet. Are you the leader? Buzz!" it asked. "Buzz! Yes!" The purple toad shouted, climbing out from the yellow shroom. "I am leader of Yellow Shroom, With Yellow, and He is in charge of Red." Purple said. "Thank you, Buzz. We will take you hostage of the Toads, along with Toadsworth."
Queen Bee Buzzed angrily at Purple and Red, while the asssistant who had captured them put them in a cage, and pointed the other 3 into another cage. "Leaders of the toad sleeper force, I have decided to kill your other three members, and keep you hostage with Toadsworth." She buzzed. "You cannot contact the Toads. Bowser has taken our planet, all off our freinds have been frozen by a wizard. Our leaders have been taken captive, it is impossible to contact our planet!" Toadsworth shouted, from a cage in the corner off the room. "Bowser!? We have teamed up to conquer the galaxies!" She laughed, but then Purple jump kicked and knocked down the queens assistant, pulling out his phaser from his pockets, and pointed at the queen. "Bowser will be eliminated, We saw his space ship spinning out off control, it knocked us into warp, and we landed here!" Red Shouted. "He has failed! We must take immidiate back up plan!" the queen roared, and buzzed loudly, which set off an alarm. Then, they saw from a window, tons of Giant Bullet bill like rockets fly into the sky. "What?" Yellow asked. "I sent them to eliminate the Koopa Troopas and Bowser, if he survived." The queen said. "The ships are teleport compatible, they should be killing them them by now." The queen said, and started an evil laugh. Then a laser hit her in the neck, shutting her up.
Then, Bowser walked into the room. "You have sent forces to assasinate me! and you have also captured the brigade that sent my son through a black hole, which re opened in the other side of the galaxy! Your planet will be taken into slavery, We have already taken down all off your troops, They were easily out numbered!" He shouted. "You are all sentenced to death!" He shouted, Dropping a bomb. Purple shot the bars on the cage, letting Toad out, then let out the others, and finally Toadsworth. "Toadley! Dont sacrifice yourself to stop the bomb. I have a emergancy Teleport device, teleports in a bunch of toads prepared to take down bombs!" Toadsworth shouted, throwing a disc infront of the bomb. It glowed, and the 20 manned bomb team climbed up. "Thanks, you saved us from the crystal bombs!" The leader shouted. They were all Purple marked, but darker than Toadley. They set up a vacuum like object and aimed it at the bomb. The Timer ticked to 5, and they fire the vacuum cleaner, the bomb sucked into it, and the Toads Ran, and as the bomb detonated, they jumped. They looked round, and saw the queen bee scream, as the fire on her died and she collapsed, but the assistant had escaped. "We still have your mushroom thingy, Buzz. You can escape. I surrender to your invasion!" The Assistant said, but the Bomb leader grabbed him, and threw him in the burning room.
At the Bee Docks, the bees headed to the yellow ship. "No!" Toad shouted. "You murdered a surrendering enemy, and didnt give the queen a chance to live. You are to violent to help us save the universe." he finished, and the Brigade ran onto the ships. The Red rose and turned, and sent an ice laser at the bombers. Then the on reds coms they heard a shout of "Wait!" as yellow ship landed. Yellow, Toadley and Toadsworth ran back to the honey comb prison and court room were they were held captive. "Theyre was other toads, in super powerfull defensive honey cells. They could have survived!" Toadsworth explained to Toad, and ran in. They saw the honey melting, and 13 more toads climbed out, with red spots. "-yawn- Look! Its the brigade!" One shouted, and they ran up to them. "I think the Lumas need to build another ship to look after these, Green, you can pilot." Toad said to the brigade, and toadsworth said "Ill stay here and look after these, send green to collect his ship, he can bring us back to the fleet".
On The HoneyStar Galaxy, A Bee Ran to the queen bee, who was massive. "Buzz! Mistress! Toad SpaceCraft are heading to our Galaxy! Buzz!" He shouted. "Take the Leaders of the Invading Army and bring them to me, and scavenge the Space Craft, and steal the technolodgy to improve our ships. And use it to prepare for Galactic Domination!" She Replied, and burst into a evil laugh.
The SpaceShroom's crashed down, and landed in a big honeycomb. The Bee who alerted the Mistress flew up to them, and buzzed, pointing at the SpaceShroom. They buzzed, and pulled out phasers. Yellow climbed out, and saw the bees. "Toad, We are back in HoneyComb galaxy. and we are stuck in honey." He shouted, then a laser hit him, knocking him out. Toad pulled out a small pistol, and climbed out, and fired at the Bees, but the Leader buzzed up to him. "Buzz! You are attempting to take this planet. Are you the leader? Buzz!" it asked. "Buzz! Yes!" The purple toad shouted, climbing out from the yellow shroom. "I am leader of Yellow Shroom, With Yellow, and He is in charge of Red." Purple said. "Thank you, Buzz. We will take you hostage of the Toads, along with Toadsworth."
Queen Bee Buzzed angrily at Purple and Red, while the asssistant who had captured them put them in a cage, and pointed the other 3 into another cage. "Leaders of the toad sleeper force, I have decided to kill your other three members, and keep you hostage with Toadsworth." She buzzed. "You cannot contact the Toads. Bowser has taken our planet, all off our freinds have been frozen by a wizard. Our leaders have been taken captive, it is impossible to contact our planet!" Toadsworth shouted, from a cage in the corner off the room. "Bowser!? We have teamed up to conquer the galaxies!" She laughed, but then Purple jump kicked and knocked down the queens assistant, pulling out his phaser from his pockets, and pointed at the queen. "Bowser will be eliminated, We saw his space ship spinning out off control, it knocked us into warp, and we landed here!" Red Shouted. "He has failed! We must take immidiate back up plan!" the queen roared, and buzzed loudly, which set off an alarm. Then, they saw from a window, tons of Giant Bullet bill like rockets fly into the sky. "What?" Yellow asked. "I sent them to eliminate the Koopa Troopas and Bowser, if he survived." The queen said. "The ships are teleport compatible, they should be killing them them by now." The queen said, and started an evil laugh. Then a laser hit her in the neck, shutting her up.
Then, Bowser walked into the room. "You have sent forces to assasinate me! and you have also captured the brigade that sent my son through a black hole, which re opened in the other side of the galaxy! Your planet will be taken into slavery, We have already taken down all off your troops, They were easily out numbered!" He shouted. "You are all sentenced to death!" He shouted, Dropping a bomb. Purple shot the bars on the cage, letting Toad out, then let out the others, and finally Toadsworth. "Toadley! Dont sacrifice yourself to stop the bomb. I have a emergancy Teleport device, teleports in a bunch of toads prepared to take down bombs!" Toadsworth shouted, throwing a disc infront of the bomb. It glowed, and the 20 manned bomb team climbed up. "Thanks, you saved us from the crystal bombs!" The leader shouted. They were all Purple marked, but darker than Toadley. They set up a vacuum like object and aimed it at the bomb. The Timer ticked to 5, and they fire the vacuum cleaner, the bomb sucked into it, and the Toads Ran, and as the bomb detonated, they jumped. They looked round, and saw the queen bee scream, as the fire on her died and she collapsed, but the assistant had escaped. "We still have your mushroom thingy, Buzz. You can escape. I surrender to your invasion!" The Assistant said, but the Bomb leader grabbed him, and threw him in the burning room.
At the Bee Docks, the bees headed to the yellow ship. "No!" Toad shouted. "You murdered a surrendering enemy, and didnt give the queen a chance to live. You are to violent to help us save the universe." he finished, and the Brigade ran onto the ships. The Red rose and turned, and sent an ice laser at the bombers. Then the on reds coms they heard a shout of "Wait!" as yellow ship landed. Yellow, Toadley and Toadsworth ran back to the honey comb prison and court room were they were held captive. "Theyre was other toads, in super powerfull defensive honey cells. They could have survived!" Toadsworth explained to Toad, and ran in. They saw the honey melting, and 13 more toads climbed out, with red spots. "-yawn- Look! Its the brigade!" One shouted, and they ran up to them. "I think the Lumas need to build another ship to look after these, Green, you can pilot." Toad said to the brigade, and toadsworth said "Ill stay here and look after these, send green to collect his ship, he can bring us back to the fleet".
Itsa Me Toadio!
Hi, Im Toad, and I have sent Simon a short Mario story i wrote to see if it could go online. And i got an invite for the site! So I have been hired to post my mario series, which is about Toads Toad Brigade from SMG (Mario Galaxy) and there adventures. The ones which are in the game will not be involved and it will Have Toad as the leader, Green and Purple as the Seconds in command (or Second and third) and Blue and Yellow as the Tin Dogs. Here is my Sypnosis for Episode 1
Mario has Saved the Toad Brigade from The Honey Hive Galaxy, and The Lumas from the Comet Observatory have built them a Ship, The StarShroom. However, The Toads have been knocked off course by Bowser Jr, who banged into them by accident, and they are heading for a galaxy owned by evil scavenger bees.
This Will be released later tonight, with a img i am working on as a header of the post
Mario has Saved the Toad Brigade from The Honey Hive Galaxy, and The Lumas from the Comet Observatory have built them a Ship, The StarShroom. However, The Toads have been knocked off course by Bowser Jr, who banged into them by accident, and they are heading for a galaxy owned by evil scavenger bees.
This Will be released later tonight, with a img i am working on as a header of the post
Wednesday 13 August 2008
To Annoy Fans of Our Clone War Series
It will be released with the movie! Since i Realised I was sending it out so close to the film, I boosted the Finale of the Clone Wars. But to Make up for this, here is a scenes worth of it ;)
Following on from the Teaser in the previous post
Dooku laughs, and reignires the lightsaber, and Plo uses the force to levitate Dooku, Mace uses his Vaapad the Began choking Dooku, Then The Wall explodes, Mace Drops Dooku and ignites his lightsaber, A Green Twi'lek with Yellow Mandalorian Armour bursts in with a blaster
Twi'lek: I have been sent here by the Universal Defence Elite Forces. I have orders to assasinate Jedi and Seperatist leaders to end the war.
Mace: What? The Jedi fight for Good. We are stopping the Sith take over!
Twi'lek shoots Plo with her blaster, knocking off his breathing mask, and he falls down, Mace grabs him and the mask, then checks for pulse.
Mace: That was un-nessascary!
Mace Ignites his saber and Reflects another blast into the Twi'leks hand, destroying the gun, but the Twi'lek laughs and kicks Mace in the Face, knocking him down,
Following on from the Teaser in the previous post
Dooku laughs, and reignires the lightsaber, and Plo uses the force to levitate Dooku, Mace uses his Vaapad the Began choking Dooku, Then The Wall explodes, Mace Drops Dooku and ignites his lightsaber, A Green Twi'lek with Yellow Mandalorian Armour bursts in with a blaster
Twi'lek: I have been sent here by the Universal Defence Elite Forces. I have orders to assasinate Jedi and Seperatist leaders to end the war.
Mace: What? The Jedi fight for Good. We are stopping the Sith take over!
Twi'lek shoots Plo with her blaster, knocking off his breathing mask, and he falls down, Mace grabs him and the mask, then checks for pulse.
Mace: That was un-nessascary!
Mace Ignites his saber and Reflects another blast into the Twi'leks hand, destroying the gun, but the Twi'lek laughs and kicks Mace in the Face, knocking him down,
Monday 11 August 2008
CWE5 (teaser, with some news about the series)
Scene 1: Base
Dooku is collapsed on the floor, with his hand sliced off, and Plo with his lightsaber. On the main meeting table a hologram appeared. Sidious.
Sidious: Dooku. What... Jedi... You failed. Dooku. Droid forces are being sent to eliminate you, and the Jedi.
He vanishes, Dooku laughs, and uses his remaining hand to open a cabinet with the force, and force pulls out a metal hand, and places it on his wrist, and uses the force on it. His skin grows onto it, and he force pulls his light saber back.
Sorry bout the length. this is just part four. which is a small teaser of part five. Which is going to be parts 1 -3 and part five, with part four in it, squeezed together. The Series has been writen by my mate, me and 2 others, and compiled together by me.
Dooku is collapsed on the floor, with his hand sliced off, and Plo with his lightsaber. On the main meeting table a hologram appeared. Sidious.
Sidious: Dooku. What... Jedi... You failed. Dooku. Droid forces are being sent to eliminate you, and the Jedi.
He vanishes, Dooku laughs, and uses his remaining hand to open a cabinet with the force, and force pulls out a metal hand, and places it on his wrist, and uses the force on it. His skin grows onto it, and he force pulls his light saber back.
Sorry bout the length. this is just part four. which is a small teaser of part five. Which is going to be parts 1 -3 and part five, with part four in it, squeezed together. The Series has been writen by my mate, me and 2 others, and compiled together by me.
Saturday 9 August 2008
CWE4
Scene 1: Base
Thire appears in the base, on the teleport pad, and begins to laugh, and a blue glow comes from his eyes, then fades off, he pulls out his gun and shoots at the controls, and all the clones point guns at him
Thire: I blocked your weapon system!
A clone with red rank markings (like thires) pulls out a small disc and puts it on his wrist. He then presses it, and a laser zaps into Thire, who then collapses.
Clone (r): Dark Side energies, must be from Illum. Wipe his mind and memories, and then use him as a embryo for his replacement.
Clone #1: Ok sir.
clone walks off
Clone #2: The Dark side energies have vanished, there heading for Rhen Var!
Jedi General: Ulic Quel Droma was one of the most recent residents of that place, 3000 years ago, he died when he was shot by Hoggon, and his spirit was then sighted back on Illum, watching his unofficial apprentice, Vima Sunrider train. Then he vanished, and has only been seen as a spirit in lightsaber crystals. He was a fallen jedi, who became sith lord, but got redeemed. I think the energies are his spirit, and the dark jedi have awoken him, and forced him back to the dark side.
Clone (r): It is reccomended that you go to hunt him down Master Perwar?
Perwar: Yes, barricade the area with gunners, shoot at all unidentified ships immediatly!
Scene 2: Starfighter landing
A Red starfighter (like Obi-Wans Ep2 one) flies towards the planet, then it lands. A blue figure like a force ghost walks up to it.
Perwar: Master Droma, Why did you wake up?
Ghost: the fire warrio-rs...
Perwar: It cant be, they were destroyed a century after the sith.
Ghost: The warriors spirits have affected the jedi order... the dark side is in a jedi apprentice of the republic....
Perwar: What?
The ghost turns red, and then pulls out Dromas saber into the ghosts hand, then the ghost turns into a hooded figure, who ignites the saber, and Perwar pulls out his, and he then slices at the ghost, but it goes threw him. The ghost roars, and turns into a red gas, which flies threw Perwar, who collapses, and the ghost burns up.
Perwar: What?
Cracks start to appear in the floor, and fire burns out from them, then a green laser hits the planet, and it explodes.
Scene 2: Seperatist base,
Count Dooku, Nute Gunray, Greivous, Rune Haako and Poggle the Lesser are sat round a table, with a map of the galaxy on the table, and holograms showing where there forces are.
Count Dooku: Plan Zetla is ready, we have already tested the main guns on the planet Rhen Var, and stole the powers of the Fire Warriors and Master Droma, to use them to power it,
A hologram appears on count dookus wrist, Darth Sidious,
Poggle: Its the maste-er!
Count Dooku: Yes, Lord Sidious?
Sidious: Clone Forces have missiled down Zetla, and it will take another... 5 years to rebuild, and another 13 to finish and charge. Also, The 3 main droid bases have been taken down, and we have lost the main supplies,
there is a explosion on the hologram, Sidious falls down, and they see a blast go over him.
Poggle: We Can Rebuild the Geonosian Factori-es!
Nute: Theve taken sidious!
Greivous: I am head of Droids, I order you to rebuild the droid factories lord dooku!
Rune: We need to send all forces to take sidious back! Were defeated...
Scene 3: On the other side off the base
A slab off ceiling falls down, and a lightsabre deignites, 2 jedi fall down, Plo Koon and Mace Windu.
Mace: We need to get to the meeting room, The droids have taken the chancellor, and the cloning facilitys have been taken offline!
Plo: Quick
Scene 4: Meeting Room
Dooku: Silence! We can build another geonosis factory, and quickly start Zetla 2,
Rune: There is jedi forces detected outside off the room!
Plo and Mace break in, and they pull out there sabers, Mace then walks towards Dooku, and Plo towards greivous, they then grab them and push them against the wall.
Mace: Wheres the Chancellor?
Dooku: Wheres my master?
Mace: We took him down, but the chacellor told us that you took down the clone forces.
Dooku: You took down our forces and operation Zetla!
Plo: Wait, both forces are offline, and both of our leaders have vanished. This is war over, or, truce, or everyone loses, We need to have a truce or both sides crumble!
Mace: Dooku, you need to sign a peace treaty or We will kill you.
Dooku pulls out his lightsaber, and slices at Mace, Who Blocks, then Greivous pulls out one off his and stabs Plo Koons arm,
Dooku: We never took down your forces, we just told them the war was over,
Mace: Because of that, we will kill you, and bring down the war. And we will win.
Dooku: (laughs) Idiot (uses lightning on mace, who flies back, and then climbs up)
Plo: Your the Idiot!
Plo hits Poggle with his saber, and Poggle collapses and his wings fall off, the geonosian guards appear, and Mace chops them down, and slices off Rune Haakos arm, and then lunges back at dooku, while the seperatists run, Mace lunges at dooku, and Plo slices down a droid. Greivous coughs and runs off. Mace then hits at dooku, and they fight, Plo slices his saber into the table and into the wall, then Plo fights dooku
Dooku: You wont destroy me!
Plo slices off dookus lightsaber arm, and takes the saber.
Thire appears in the base, on the teleport pad, and begins to laugh, and a blue glow comes from his eyes, then fades off, he pulls out his gun and shoots at the controls, and all the clones point guns at him
Thire: I blocked your weapon system!
A clone with red rank markings (like thires) pulls out a small disc and puts it on his wrist. He then presses it, and a laser zaps into Thire, who then collapses.
Clone (r): Dark Side energies, must be from Illum. Wipe his mind and memories, and then use him as a embryo for his replacement.
Clone #1: Ok sir.
clone walks off
Clone #2: The Dark side energies have vanished, there heading for Rhen Var!
Jedi General: Ulic Quel Droma was one of the most recent residents of that place, 3000 years ago, he died when he was shot by Hoggon, and his spirit was then sighted back on Illum, watching his unofficial apprentice, Vima Sunrider train. Then he vanished, and has only been seen as a spirit in lightsaber crystals. He was a fallen jedi, who became sith lord, but got redeemed. I think the energies are his spirit, and the dark jedi have awoken him, and forced him back to the dark side.
Clone (r): It is reccomended that you go to hunt him down Master Perwar?
Perwar: Yes, barricade the area with gunners, shoot at all unidentified ships immediatly!
Scene 2: Starfighter landing
A Red starfighter (like Obi-Wans Ep2 one) flies towards the planet, then it lands. A blue figure like a force ghost walks up to it.
Perwar: Master Droma, Why did you wake up?
Ghost: the fire warrio-rs...
Perwar: It cant be, they were destroyed a century after the sith.
Ghost: The warriors spirits have affected the jedi order... the dark side is in a jedi apprentice of the republic....
Perwar: What?
The ghost turns red, and then pulls out Dromas saber into the ghosts hand, then the ghost turns into a hooded figure, who ignites the saber, and Perwar pulls out his, and he then slices at the ghost, but it goes threw him. The ghost roars, and turns into a red gas, which flies threw Perwar, who collapses, and the ghost burns up.
Perwar: What?
Cracks start to appear in the floor, and fire burns out from them, then a green laser hits the planet, and it explodes.
Scene 2: Seperatist base,
Count Dooku, Nute Gunray, Greivous, Rune Haako and Poggle the Lesser are sat round a table, with a map of the galaxy on the table, and holograms showing where there forces are.
Count Dooku: Plan Zetla is ready, we have already tested the main guns on the planet Rhen Var, and stole the powers of the Fire Warriors and Master Droma, to use them to power it,
A hologram appears on count dookus wrist, Darth Sidious,
Poggle: Its the maste-er!
Count Dooku: Yes, Lord Sidious?
Sidious: Clone Forces have missiled down Zetla, and it will take another... 5 years to rebuild, and another 13 to finish and charge. Also, The 3 main droid bases have been taken down, and we have lost the main supplies,
there is a explosion on the hologram, Sidious falls down, and they see a blast go over him.
Poggle: We Can Rebuild the Geonosian Factori-es!
Nute: Theve taken sidious!
Greivous: I am head of Droids, I order you to rebuild the droid factories lord dooku!
Rune: We need to send all forces to take sidious back! Were defeated...
Scene 3: On the other side off the base
A slab off ceiling falls down, and a lightsabre deignites, 2 jedi fall down, Plo Koon and Mace Windu.
Mace: We need to get to the meeting room, The droids have taken the chancellor, and the cloning facilitys have been taken offline!
Plo: Quick
Scene 4: Meeting Room
Dooku: Silence! We can build another geonosis factory, and quickly start Zetla 2,
Rune: There is jedi forces detected outside off the room!
Plo and Mace break in, and they pull out there sabers, Mace then walks towards Dooku, and Plo towards greivous, they then grab them and push them against the wall.
Mace: Wheres the Chancellor?
Dooku: Wheres my master?
Mace: We took him down, but the chacellor told us that you took down the clone forces.
Dooku: You took down our forces and operation Zetla!
Plo: Wait, both forces are offline, and both of our leaders have vanished. This is war over, or, truce, or everyone loses, We need to have a truce or both sides crumble!
Mace: Dooku, you need to sign a peace treaty or We will kill you.
Dooku pulls out his lightsaber, and slices at Mace, Who Blocks, then Greivous pulls out one off his and stabs Plo Koons arm,
Dooku: We never took down your forces, we just told them the war was over,
Mace: Because of that, we will kill you, and bring down the war. And we will win.
Dooku: (laughs) Idiot (uses lightning on mace, who flies back, and then climbs up)
Plo: Your the Idiot!
Plo hits Poggle with his saber, and Poggle collapses and his wings fall off, the geonosian guards appear, and Mace chops them down, and slices off Rune Haakos arm, and then lunges back at dooku, while the seperatists run, Mace lunges at dooku, and Plo slices down a droid. Greivous coughs and runs off. Mace then hits at dooku, and they fight, Plo slices his saber into the table and into the wall, then Plo fights dooku
Dooku: You wont destroy me!
Plo slices off dookus lightsaber arm, and takes the saber.
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