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Saturday 16 August 2008

Mr Pretzel. Chapter One

This is the story sent to simon to go onto the site, along with the third in the toad series (the one after next) and it involves mr pretzel in a race against time to stop dr. yes, with his t.d.s time machine. oh, and his best freinds a talking pie!

Chapter one!

mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car.

In the secret lab 10 miles south of the a98, a door spun open, a man walked in, guarded, "Doctor, time has changed!" it is rippling up, time will be consumed! i f eel like its getting to me... hes stopping me kill my dad... he stopping me getting out from prison! stopping me joining you....." he shouted, and burnt up, the man at the other end of the lab thought carefully.

the pretzel and pie pressed buttons on the modified dashboard, then mr pretzel hits the accelorate, they speed forwards, and there is a flash of green light, mr pretzel screams, and they hit the breaks. They look outside the window, "2314" mr pie says, and climbs out. "2314" he said, and climbed out, and climbed back in, "2314" he said again, and climbed back out, then in again, and kept repeating, then they went back in time, back to 2033, then, they went back to the future, "2314!" mr pie said, and then climbed out. There was a huge explosion, the buildings all collapsed, the people turned to tramps, and time changed, pie turned round, and saw the car turn into a soap box race car. "Time is changing!" mr Pie shouted, and looked up, the sky turned red. pretzel screamed "noo!" and jumped into the soap box, he looked and saw the same dashboard, and he sped back to the past, he landed in his workshop, and saw it had been burnt down, and mr pie was building his soap box racer time machine, then he looked up, and saw himself and mr pretzel, "What..." he said, and the version building burnt, followed by the current version and then mr pretzel. Mr pretzel found himself back on the floor later, then ran up to some controls, "wierd dream!" he said, mr pretzel slammed a lever down, and jumped away from his console, an explosion filled his lab, the lights flickered on, one at a time, and then he saw a car light up, a green ford KA, with its windows covered, it had boosts on the side, and a voice activated door, with fingerprint locks. mr pie had the idea of it being disguised as a really bad car, and he was inside it, re-wiring the brakes. He climbed out, slamming the door, he was a apple flavoured pie with glasses and wearing a suit. "done, ive recoded the megaflux duel engines to calibrate high exposure to void stuff while taking the hydroplactic megaprocsessor and shoving a time engine in it stolen from the test flight to '63 from the famous tardis!" Pie said, mr pretzel nodded. climbing to the car. "What... time loop!" Pretzel shouted,

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